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He called her, emailed her, texted her, tweeted her—all to no use.

Strictly speaking, I would need to write texted her and tweeted her, but I'm omitting and to convey a rhythm and sense of urgency. What do you call this kind of construction, and is it accepted grammar (at least for creative writing, if not in an academic context)?

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It's a rhetorical device called asyndeton, and you can find its definition (as well as those of other rhetorical figures) here.

Asyndeton consists of omitting conjunctions between words, phrases, or clauses. In a list of items, asyndeton gives the effect of unpremeditated multiplicity, of an extemporaneous rather than a labored account: On his return he received medals, honors, treasures, titles, fame.

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I was taught that omitting the 'and' in such a situation was completely acceptable, especially in creative writing. The rhythm is much better without it. Leave it as is.

  • Not only that, It seems it is acceptable in a New York Times editorial. "...his entire career makes a mockery of faith, family, tradition, virtue." https://www.nytimes.com/2017/07/08/opinion/sunday/the-west-and-what-comes-after.html?_r=0 – H2ONaCl Jul 11 '17 at 01:32
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    'I came, I saw[,] and I conquered.' Not quite as punchy. – Edwin Ashworth Nov 09 '17 at 11:02