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The self-storage industry has three times the footprint than McDonald’s.

Or:

The self-storage industry has three times the footprint of McDonald’s.

Barmar
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The first needs a fix:

The self-storage industry has three times more footprint than McDonald’s.

The other is correct and - as Professor Lawler says - simpler.

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  • Three times the footprint of Z is OK, and quite common. Using three times more just raises the question of whether you're talking about 3X or 4X, plus it requires comparative syntax, which is very fussy. – John Lawler Apr 24 '15 at 18:18
  • @JohnLawler Professor Lawler, surely I don't have anything against Three times the footprint of Z, just wanted to fix the other choice for the OP, so he/she would have more choices to choose from :-) – Marius Hancu Apr 24 '15 at 20:13
  • I have something against three times more —exactly what Prof Lawler has against it—it's ambiguous at best, and misleading to anyone who takes it literally. – Brian Hitchcock Apr 25 '15 at 07:30
  • ... which leaves me wondering just how much of a lady Lionel Richie's woman was! – David Garner Apr 25 '15 at 15:58