The word for a story or article that is keeping the reader's attention.
Example sentence:
I would like to rewrite this story to make it more ...
The word for a story or article that is keeping the reader's attention.
Example sentence:
I would like to rewrite this story to make it more ...
Compelling or engaging may convey the idea:
- having a powerful and irresistible effect: a compelling drama.
The Free Dictionary
That is a gripping story. From the verb grip, defined in Merriam-Webster as:
2 : to hold the interest of strongly < a story that grips the reader >
So your example would read:
I would like to rewrite this story to make it more gripping.
Riveting
absolutely fascinating; enthralling
A page-turner (... to make it more of a page-turner).
a book so exciting or gripping that one is compelled to read it very rapidly.
I suggest the word riveting.
If you are not familiar with the word rivet, a rivet is a metal fastener with a welder joins two pieces of steel together under extreme heat. The bond thus formed is designed to be permanent.
If your story keeps and holds your readers' attention, it fastens itself to the reader and won't let go! In other words, the story gets and keeps the audience's attention.
I would like to rewrite this story to make it more riveting.