finding the error in a sentence

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can anyone help me out with this sentence on error correction ? :

many goods are being manufactured quickly without/ any regard for quality and as consumers we must be / aware of our rights and the government / should penalize them who indulge in unscrupulous business practices

along with this I have one more doubt, how could you use "THEM WHO" in a sentence, is that even grammatically correct ?

You'll need to be more specific. There are many issues with the quote: capitalisation, punctuation, style, etc. This archived blog post might be of some help: Proofreading Questions. — Lawrence, Dec 02 '17 at 11:10

score 0 · Accepted Answer · answered Dec 02 '17 at 10:52

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In my opinion, just who instead of them who seems to make more sense.

Many goods are being manufactured quickly without any regards for quality. As consumers, we must be aware of our rights andgovernment should penalize who indulge in such unscrupulous business practices.

answered Dec 02 '17 at 10:52

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"who" by itself is not typically used like this. I would expect "those who". Related questions: “Can I help who's next?”, Can we use “who” by itself as a subject in spoken language? – herisson Dec 02 '17 at 23:10

finding the error in a sentence

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