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Is using a semicolon before a coordinating conjunction connecting two independent clauses wrong? Like in this example:

Some people write with a word processor, tablet, or even a phone; but others, for different reasons, choose to write with a pen or pencil.

Laurel
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There are three cases where you should use a semicolon to separate independent clauses:

  1. When there is no coordinating conjunction between clauses.

  2. When there are three or more clauses.

  3. When there are commas (for any other reason) in any one of the clauses.

The last two rules hold even if there is a coordinating conjunction between the clauses. You can almost think of the case where you use a comma (two clauses with a conjunction) as an "exception" (but not really since it's the most common case).

Your example fits case #3; so yes, the semicolon is correct.

For example, the Chicago Manual of style has:

In formal prose, a semicolon may be used instead—either to effect a stronger separation between clauses or when the second independent clause has internal punctuation (6.59). (my emphasis)

Semicolons can be used in place of commas when a series of items contains internal punctuation (6.60).

Some have interpreted "series of items" to mean only a list, but it is entirely reasonable for the "series" to consist of independent clauses, as they're larger-order constructs than lists, and 6.59 at least permits the semicolon even if it doesn't mandate one.

Spencer
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  • "Your example fits case #3; so yes, the semicolon is correct." -- Can you tell me which of the rules you give (or any other) makes this sentence correct? – HeWhoMustBeNamed Jan 28 '20 at 16:09
  • @MrReality Rule #3 makes the sentence about Rule #3 correct. There is a comma after "yes". – Spencer Jan 28 '20 at 16:48
  • @Spencer: the commas before and after "so yes" are parenthetical - they are not list commas. #3 applies to lists. – Greybeard Mar 07 '23 at 12:38
  • @Greybeard No. Rule #3 applies to any appearance of commas in one of the two independent clauses, for any reason. – Spencer Mar 07 '23 at 15:14
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Some people write with a word processor, tablet, or even a phone; but others, for different reasons, choose to write with a pen or pencil.

A semicolon is conjunctive and mainly used to avoid accusations of a comma splice.

But is a conjunction.

You don't need two conjunctions - lose one of them.

Greybeard
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  • "mainly used to avoid accusations" implies that you think semicolons only exist to placate pedants. – Spencer Mar 13 '23 at 17:07
  • @Spencer Can you confirm that you are stating that the semicolon and the "but" should both be retained? – Greybeard Mar 14 '23 at 00:29