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  • He went into the room, opening the door using a skeleton key.

Is the time-sequence (participial clause describing an event taking place before the main-clause event) correct?

Is the ‘using’ clause showing method?

Grammarly has an article explaining the use of the present participle clause:

Present participle clauses

A present participle clause can express:

  • an action that happens at the same time as the action in the main clause:

Tom lost his keys (while) walking through the park. (Tom lost his keys while he was walking through the park.)

She left the room singing happily. (She left the room as she was singing happily.)

The participle clause can come first in literary styles:

(While) walking through the park, Tom lost his keys.

  • an action that happens just before another action:

Opening the envelope, I found two concert tickets. (I opened the envelope and I found two concert tickets.)

  • an action that is the result of another action:

Moments later a bomb exploded, leaving three people dead and twelve others injured.

When I entered they all looked at me, making me feel uncomfortable.

  • a reason for the action in the main clause:

Having nothing left to do, Paula went home. (Since Paula had nothing left to do, she went home.)

Knowing a little Russian, I had no difficulty making myself understood. (As I knew a little Russian, I had no difficulty making myself understood.)

Working as a sales rep, I get to travel a lot. (I travel a lot because I work as a sales rep.)

This licenses the ‘opening the door …‘ being placed contrary to logic after ‘He went into the room’. But Grammarly doesn’t seem to provide a suitable classification of the way in which the obviously grammatical second ing-clause, ‘using a …’, is used.

Is there a better overall look at the way in which present participial (ing-) clauses are used?

  • I believe there is, and though answering one's own question right away is something I am usually very wary of, I see the loss of the material below (originally posted as an answer in a then-closed question) as a worse scenario. This course of action was suggested by a mod. – Edwin Ashworth Feb 05 '21 at 16:44
  • I actually answered this question somewhere but wouldn't know how to find it. This: He went into the room, opening the door using a skeleton key. is merely a stylistic alternative to: He went into the room and opened the door using a skeleton key. Also, the comma is really, really important and some of your examples are not this structure.... – Lambie Feb 05 '21 at 17:08
  • I'm not as happy with the 'and' sentence here; there's far more of the 'and then', sequesntial-as-read, flavour, not nearly as evident in the original. Your sentence sounds like there was a second door in the room. – Edwin Ashworth Feb 05 '21 at 17:12
  • Whatever, Edwin. Your initial sentence is very different from the others you posted. She ran out the door, singing loudly. That structure is not like your other examples. A SVO followed by a present participle clause. They are different beasts. – Lambie Feb 05 '21 at 17:16

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Firstly, ing-clauses may often be used either to describe something intrinsic about the statement in the main clause

('He communicated using a radio' = 'He communicated by radio') (restrictive)

or to tack on additional information

('He communicated, using a radio' = 'He communicated; he did this by radio') (non-restrictive).

But what sort of additional information may be added using ing-clauses? And are there any restrictions we should be aware of?

This 2015 post at Helping Writers become Authors.com – K M Weiland by Eliza Dee has very useful analysis of how ing-clauses are used (note the older 'phrasal' analysis is used) (amended):

... [There sometimes seems to be an implication] that, because it’s the present participle that’s involved, there’s somehow a requirement that the relationship the participial phrase indicates must be one of simultaneity.

The problem is, it just isn’t true. ... [T]his supposed rule is not now, nor has it ever been a feature of English grammar, descriptive or prescriptive or otherwise. I haven’t even been able to find any advice along these lines that’s older than a few years, nor any that appears in any reliable grammar, usage or linguistics text, and when I asked my editors’ groups about it last year, in search of the source of the bad advice, none of the members there even knew what I was talking about or had ever heard of such advice being given. One did, however, point me in the direction of a very dry but extremely relevant-to-this-discussion linguistics text, Free Adjuncts and Absolutes in English: Problems of control and interpretation, by Bernd Kortmann, from which I’m drawing a lot of what I’ll go on to say below.

There’s nothing whatsoever technically wrong in a sentence like

  • Tying her shoe, Josie heads out of the house.

The fact that the two events cannot logically be simultaneous is not a problem. In fact, present participial phrases are what Kortmann describes as “semantically indeterminate”—that is, they can mean different things, in terms of the relationship between the phrase and what it modifies, depending on context. As Kortmann explains, such constructions are “unmarked for tense and mood. Constructions without a perfect-participial head also neutralize the aspectual distinction ‘imperfective/perfective (progressive/non-progressive)’”. That last bit means, in linguistics jargon, that present participial phrases not only don’t tell us tense, they don’t tell us whether an action was completed (unless the perfect participial, eg 'having done something', is used).

Moreover, “whether the relationship holding between these constructions and the matrix clause [that is, the clause modified by the participial phrase] is a temporal, causal, conditional, etc., or an adverbial one at all, needs to be determined for each individual instance”. So not only is simultaneity not required, but 'temporal' in general is only one type of relationship these constructions can indicate.

One such relationship is, indeed, [just a basic] Simultaneity, but there are numerous others, including:

  • Anteriority ('Sitting down in his favourite armchair, he took out his pipe.')

  • Posteriority ('She left her apartment, slamming the door.') –Note that the placement of the participial phrase is what tends to distinguish anteriority from posteriority; compare “He sat down, crossing his legs” with “Crossing his legs, he sat down”–the latter is illogical because no logical relationship between the phrase and the matrix clause, temporal or otherwise, comes to mind

  • Conditionality (this one’s a bit trickier to understand, but for example, in a sentence like, 'He was a terrible husband, putting it mildly', the idea of the modifier is something like 'if we are to put it mildly') [a comment clause: a pragmatic marker]

  • Instrumentality ('Using the knife, he cut his meat.')

  • Manner ('The little girl walked to school, skipping all the way there.')

  • Accompanying circumstance ('She stood in the hallway, wearing a red dress'– this is superficially similar to simultaneity, but not the same, as you wouldn’t say “she stood there at the same time as she was wearing a red dress” – it wouldn’t be logical)

  • Concessivity (meaning something like 'although', as in 'Knowing the consequences, she broke the rule anyway.')

  • Causation ([Hammering the cliffs, the incessant waves finally brought down the famous sea-arch.])

  • Result ('He ran very fast in the footrace, coming in second.')

  • Purpose [/ reason (involving a logical course of action taken)] ('He slowed down, avoiding a person he didn’t want to run into.') (The default reading here is that intent was involved.) / ('He telephoned saying that he was not coming the party.') (Example by @Eglantine; few would argue that this does not address purpose.)

(He telephoned saying that he was not coming the party.)

The examples above are my own [I've given a correct causative, EA], but all the semantic categories are from the Kortmann text. ... Of course, whether they’re stylistically preferable in a given context is a different question, and a much more subjective question....

This is a very useful breakdown of semantic usages of present-participial clauses. I've given it for a complete overview, though the example of the instrumentality usage is (apart from the fronting) a perfect match. So an adverbial showing instrumentality, not method.

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    Yes, it's quite nice. I'd say means instead of instrumentality, but that's a minor quibble. And note that the distinctions expressed by causation, result, and purpose are very hard to disentangle in practice. Once you get into the realm of thought and judgement, everything gets all blurry. – John Lawler Feb 05 '21 at 17:04
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    I was about to say the instrumentality category seems a bit suspect to me. It looks more like a quirk of using that allows it to function as a preposition. If you say something like hammering at the door, he finally broke through, that does indicate the instrument or means, but it feels incidental. I'd file this type of sentence under causation rather than instrumentality. – rchivers Feb 05 '21 at 17:09
  • I go with 'choice of tool' here. The skeleton key wasn't essential per se (a crowbar or sledgehammer would probably have worked). But as JL says, muddy waters. // A separate question looking at these fine distinctions might prove profitable (or not). – Edwin Ashworth Feb 05 '21 at 17:18
  • Seems to me there's a difference between the example above (where using is acting like with) and something like they got the X ready, using a knife to Y (where there clearly is a participle clause expressing means). Even in the second case, though, it seems you need using or some synonym. Maybe there are counterexamples, but if not this makes the instrumentality category different from the others. – rchivers Feb 05 '21 at 17:28
  • One can easily see a difference between 'He eventually solved it using (= by means of) calculus' and 'He painted the sky using (= opting to use) ArtDunce Nacre 21 and 41 Series watercolour brushes.' – Edwin Ashworth Feb 05 '21 at 17:38
  • The main instrumentality here is opening — not using: He went into the room [by] opening the door. Then: He opened the door [by] using a skeleton key. – Tinfoil Hat Feb 06 '21 at 02:10
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