Question about parallel structures

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One of the tasks that we have to do on PTE exam is to paraphrase a writtent text. I have prepared a template for myslef which is

While the impacts of N and N such as N and N are important, the effects of N and N such as N and N are significant, and the influences of N and N such as N and N are remarkable.

Now, my questions is, when using this template as there is a coordinating conjunction of " and" should all the noun phrases be in the same structure, namely both gerund, infiniting, adj+noun and so forth? Or there is no need for that?

Example :

While the impacts of making money and modern approaches Such as Different books and collections of assignments

Related: black and lab mouse ... using coordinated adjectives and attributive nouns. // Also, ing-forms and prototypical nouns can co-occur in (at least some) coordinate structures: NHS: 'Building and demolition works at St George’s'. But too broad. — Edwin Ashworth, Mar 23 '21 at 16:30
The specified "template" would probably *always* result in virtually unreadable text, no matter what noun phrases were used instead of all those Ns. So as regards the merits and/or constraints of "parallelism", the only thing I would say is three occurrences of the construction *N and N such as N and N* in a single utterance is just ridiculous. — FumbleFingers, Mar 23 '21 at 16:43
I'd use "Different books and collections of assignments," as easy to understand, and not "making money and modern approaches," as hard to understand. — Yosef Baskin, Mar 23 '21 at 17:24

Question about parallel structures

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