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I saw that there were already examples on this, but I didn't find any specific enough. My problem is this sentence:

If there were anything that he didn't want, it was to hurt me.

I previously had the sentence written as:

If there was anything that he didn't want, it was to hurt me.

But both seem a little awkward to me.

RegDwigнt
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Rachel
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    Past tense (was) required here. Compare "If there was one thing he really wanted to avoid, it was hurting me." – Edwin Ashworth Mar 05 '14 at 20:12
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    Even a present tense can be used here: “If there is anything he didn’t want, it was to hurt me”. – Janus Bahs Jacquet Mar 05 '14 at 20:28
  • The only problem is that the sentence is in a short story that's written in past tense, and while I was changing everything to past tense I ran into this problem. Sorry, I should have specified! – Rachel Mar 05 '14 at 20:30
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  • @MetaEd, it is useful to me. The question came up quickly in the search results and the accepted answer also answered my question. Seems like the question could be reopened. – Suragch Mar 19 '21 at 08:50

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"Were" would be subjunctive, expressing a condition contrary to fact ("If there were anything that he didn't want [but there wasn't anything that he didn't want]"); "was" would be a simple condition. So you want "was" here.

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Slightly off-topic, but I think it's the "anything" that makes the sentence a little awkward. Maybe "one thing" would be better.

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