PROOFREADING essays Tasks 1 and 2 are strictly OFF TOPIC. IELTS stands for The International English Language Testing System, which is widely recognized as a reliable means of assessing the language ability of candidates who need to study or work in countries where English is the main form of communication.
While proofreading essays is always off-topic, questions about the word order, idiomaticity, grammaticality of a SINGLE sentence, phrase or word are accepted. Please identify the specific issue, share your understanding and research with the community, and explain in as much as detail as possible why you are confused. You can mention which part of the IELTS exam in your question. For example, "Reading Passage 2", also include the quotation in full, the source, and a link whenever possible.